I wrote these comments on a friends blog so I'm just going to put them here to say what I thought about the book. There are big spoilers here so don't read any further if you don't want things ruined. I'm sorry if you loved this book. Let me just say I didn't hate it but I was VERY disappointed.
I didn't love the book. I may be in the minority. And if you haven't read it and don't want it spoiled don't read any further. (Or if you did love it my comments might make you mad.)
Here is what I didn't like
1. I didn't feel like she was true to the characters at all. I felt like she had characters doing and saying things that they wouldn't do or say...
A couple examples, Bella being totally fine with the fact that she was pregnant. This is the girl that was so against getting married but didn't so much as blink when she finds out she is 18 and pregnant. I just thought that was out of character.
Then with Carlisle, he is a brilliant doctor and we are supposed to believe that he isn't going to even think of the tiny possibility that she might get pregnant. Especially when once he finds out he remembers these "legends" and says it is a possibility. I just have a hard time believing that he wouldn't think of that before.
Then Edward, I thought it was completely ridiculous when he suggested to Jacob that he sleep with Bella so she can have a child. I know people will say that is just because he loves her and wants to give her everything that she wants. Silly. I don't think Edward would ever resort to letting Jacob sleep with Bella.
Then Alice, she can't be around Bella because the baby gives her a headache. No way. Alice loves Bella. I don't believe she would stay away for such a silly reason when Bella is teetering between life and death.
I just felt like she took these characters that we have grown to love and made them so shallow. The stories are about the characters and there was so little about the characters in this book. She never even mentioned Carlisle at the wedding. It felt like in the first three books it was all about the characters and she wrote the story around them. This time it felt like she made the characters fit the story.
2. I hated the fact that everything was all wrapped up neatly. There was no conflict. She totally contradicted herself. Bella can never get pregnant but it is a sacrifice she is willing to go through because she wants to be forever with Edward. Oh wait. She can have a baby. Never mind about that. Bella will be a crazed newborn for a couple of years and may never see her family again. Oh never mind she is fine and her dad doesn't seem to have any problem with any of it.
3. Jacob imprinting on Nessie. Yuck. Hey I used to be in love with your mom and imagine what she looked like naked, but since I can't have her I guess you will do.
4. I'm going to sound like a total prude here with this one but I feel like SM had such an opportunity to reach a lot of young girls. And what message does she give them? That everything will turn out fine and there won't be any conflict. Having a handsome husband and a beautiful baby, nice cars and a closet full of clothes is what will make you happy. I just think she had such a great chance to really send a message about sacrifice and working through things to WORK to get what you really want but then the main character of the story just gets everything handed to her. I also had a problem with the adult content of the book. Well not the actual content but the fact that it is supposed to be for young adults. She can write whatever she wants to but I didn't feel like some of those things needed to be in this series considering the age group that it is marketed to. My almost 12 year old has read the other books and is not happy that I don't want her to read this one.
4. I thought that it was WAY over the top. Yes it is fantasy but I found the first three books so "believable". But with this one I feel like she just went way over the top when she didn't need to. I found myself just rolling my eyes a lot of the time. The magic was lost for me. That is what I liked about her other books but I didn't feel that with this one.
I loved the first three books and was just so disappointed in this one. I feel like she sacrificed the characters that we all love for a very rushed, not thought out, weird, and very weak story. Sorry, go ahead and throw rotten tomatoes at me.